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A comment for Project Snapshot Template

Comment: Kristi - This is great. I really like how you integrated some of our suggestions. As presented, this is a powerful... see more
Author: Mike DeSchryver (Student)
Date Added: Jul 16, 2010
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Rating: 4 rating
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A comment for Project Snapshot Template/Teaching Writing With Food

Comment: Ruth - You did a nice job of integrating our comments into this final version. In particular, I like how you re-wrote... see more
Author: Mike DeSchryver (Student)
Date Added: Jul 16, 2010
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Rating: 4 rating
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A comment for Prepositions of Placement building project

Comment: Birgitte, I like you how integrated our suggestions in questions 1 and 3 in the snapshot. The intro is much more engaging... see more
Author: Mike DeSchryver (Student)
Date Added: Jul 16, 2010
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Rating: 4 rating
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A comment for Project Snapshot

Comment: Jillian - The intro is better and definitely tells about what you did. But, whenever you are doing something like this,... see more
Author: Mike DeSchryver (Student)
Date Added: Jul 16, 2010
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Rating: 4 rating
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A comment for Literary Elements

Comment: Patrica - There is clearly a really good plan for teaching literary elements in this submission. However, as presented, it... see more
Author: Mike DeSchryver (Student)
Date Added: Jul 16, 2010
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Rating: 4 rating
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A comment for Rube Goldberg Simple Machines Contraption

Comment: Jessica - This is much better than the first draft. Your intro is really engaging and should make readers want to find out... see more
Author: Mike DeSchryver (Student)
Date Added: Jul 16, 2010
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Rating: 4 rating
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A comment for Project Snapshot

Comment: Bill - this was really well done the first time around, and now is even a little better. You've done a nice job of... see more
Author: Mike DeSchryver (Student)
Date Added: Jul 16, 2010
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Rating: 4 rating
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A comment for Snapshot: Plate Boundaries

Comment: Candance - This was good on the first time around, now it is even better. You've done a nice job integrating our suggestions... see more
Author: Mike DeSchryver (Student)
Date Added: Jul 16, 2010
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Rating: 4 rating
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A comment for Project Snapshot

Comment: Andrea - this version is more impressive that the first and provide more important details for potential readers. You've... see more
Author: Mike DeSchryver (Student)
Date Added: Jul 16, 2010
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A comment for Comprehensible Input Snapshot

Comment: Jamie - this was good the first time around and is even better now. You did well elaborating on the ideas in your intro, and... see more
Author: Mike DeSchryver (Student)
Date Added: Jul 16, 2010
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