Overall, I thought that your presenation was very informative and well put together. I really liked the navigation tools at the bottom of your presenation. I thought it made it easy for students to work at their own pace, spending time reading through the presenation. I also like the role play activity towards that presentation. I liked the feedback it gave and how the students had to put all their knowledge to answer the questions thoughtfully.
One thing that I thought you could improve upon are the animations that you had on the slides. I liked that they grabbed the attention of the viewer on each slide but I found it a little distracting when I was reading the slide. I had to re-read to make sure I got the information. You might just want to put the sound with the first bullet point and not the rest. I also found that the red writing was a little hard to read at times. You may want to try a more dull shade of red.
I also had some technical difficulties; please see below.
I was not able to view your video introduction about what Extensive Reading is. I clicked on the video but nothing ever happened. Because of this, I was a little confused at the beginning of the presenation. I also found that sometimes that arrows on the pages were not working and it wouldn't let me move ahead or go back to the previous slide unless I started over at the beginning. Lastly, I was not able to use the link to e-mail you at the end because my default mailer isn't set up. You may want to add your e-mail address to the slide in case other people run into this problem as well.